The hook is the first one to three seconds of a short video, or the first line of a post. It decides whether anyone sees the rest. A strong hook isn’t clickbait. It tells the right viewer, fast, that this video is for them and worth their time.
The short answer: a good hook names a specific viewer or problem, creates a reason to keep watching, and is delivered in the first second with matching text on screen. Write 3–5 hooks for every video, pick the clearest, and make sure the video actually delivers what the hook promises.
What makes a hook work
- Specific: “Coaches charging $3,000+” beats “entrepreneurs”.
- Fast: say it in the first second. No intro, no “hey guys”.
- Visual: put the hook as on-screen text too; many people watch muted.
- Honest: the video must pay off the promise, or viewers leave and stop trusting you.
- For buyers: hook the people who could hire you, not just anyone who might watch.
10 hook types with examples
| Hook type | Example |
|---|---|
| Problem | “If your Reels get views but no clients, this is why.” |
| Mistake | “Stop doing this on your sales calls.” |
| Contrarian | “Posting every day is bad advice for most coaches.” |
| Question | “Why do some agents get listings from Instagram and others don’t?” |
| Specific number | “The 3 questions I ask every new client.” |
| Story | “A client almost quit last month. Here’s what changed.” |
| Myth | “You don’t need more followers to get clients.” |
| Curiosity | “The part of my process nobody sees.” |
| Direct call-out | “Consultants charging under $2,000, watch this.” |
| Before/after | “Same offer, new headline, completely different calls.” |
A simple formula for writing hooks
[Who] + [problem or desire] + [tension]. For example: “Real estate agents posting only listings (who + problem) are invisible to sellers (tension).” Write five versions, read them out loud, and keep the one you’d stop scrolling for.
Delivery matters as much as words
- Start mid-sentence, already speaking, with energy.
- Put the hook as large text in the top half of the screen.
- Cut every word you can.
- Show something moving in the first second: a gesture, a cut, a prop.
- Look into the lens, not at yourself on screen.
Hook mistakes to avoid
- Introductions before the point (“Hi, I’m…, today I want to talk about…”).
- Vague hooks (“This changed everything”).
- Clickbait the video doesn’t deliver.
- Hooks aimed at a mass audience when you sell to a niche.
- Great hook, slow middle. Keep the pace up after the first line too.
Next, see why Reels get views but no clients and how to batch-record a week of videos.
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Frequently asked questions
What is a hook in a video?
The first one to three seconds of a short video, spoken and usually shown as on-screen text, that tells the right viewer why they should keep watching.
How long should a hook be?
Short enough to say in one to three seconds, often under 12 words. Cut anything that delays the point.
How do I write a good hook?
Name a specific viewer or problem, add tension or curiosity, write several versions, and choose the clearest one. Make sure the video delivers on it.
Should I use clickbait hooks?
No. Hooks that don’t match the video make people leave early and stop trusting you, which hurts both reach and sales.